[quote=@TheForgottenArc]
OH! and please tell me how it is, That's the most I've ever written in one sitting and I want opinions and advice (PM's Preferable though.)
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I'm not going to comment much on writting. Practice makes perfect, and you're getting better. But I would like to say, your Burmy in my original post was female. Indigo caught the male Burmy. Also, the attack Burmy was using was Struggle. Also, I'd rather you not mention levels [i]per se[/i] I'd rather levels be treated as a background game mechanic. 

On the note of levels however. Both of your Pokemon gain 1 level for training, bringing Burmy up to 4 and Turtwig up to 7. 

Also [@prettydrops], your Pokemon gain 1 level each for training as well. 

I will get reply posts up in the morning, or perhaps here shortly tonight. I just got off work.