[@Dealdric] Welcome! you just missed the first drop, but there's always room! A few issues with the profile that I'd like to see addressed: He's very old for a Bespanite, in fact, he'd be considered elderly and near the end of his life. A mercenary company would not risk losing valuable Mechs by sending someone so near the end of their life into battle. .41 isn't that large a caliber, in fact, it's actually smaller than a .44 caliber commonly used in large revolvers today. This isn't really an issue but seems like the opposite of what you were aiming for, so I wanted to mention it. That cloaking device is wildly overpowered, a cloaking device like that would not be able to mask thermal, radar, and sonar. not that sonar would really be used since it's almost exclusive to underwater vehicles but the point stands. Nix the thermal, radar, and sonar blocking and it's fine. He has so many skills, and so proficient in all of them, I'll need you to either tone down his proficiencies in those skills, or limit his expert-level abilities to one or two things. How is he loyal to a fault, and yet always questioning his leader's moves? These aspects kind of clash with each other. Bio is pretty good but could use something about what led him to the Lightning Tigers specifically. As for the mech, things look good, though it does seem a little under gunned. You could throw an extra light weapon or two on there if you'd like.