[quote=@VitaVitaAR]
[@Seirei No Hai]: To be fair, a detective [i]does[/i] work, it's just joining a police force officially that seemed a bit strange to me.

[@vietmyke]: He is.
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You mean a standalone detective? If so, I should edit a few bits and pieces of that.

[quote=@Feyblue]
[@Seirei No Hai]Yeah, I was actually going to comment. Not sure if "Musuko" can even be used as a name either, since it would be like a person just being named "Son," and "Jinkouteki na" is just the adjective form of "artificial." It seems less like a name and more like the result of a google translate query... ^^;

Although, there are plenty of simple name forms that are literally just written as "eldest son" (Taro) "second son" (Jiro) etc. And a better surname, if you're planning on making it meaningful to his magecraft like I assume you meant to, might be something like "Hagane" (written as "White Steel") or "Kaji" (written as "Blacksmith").

Hope this helps.

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I'll take your advice and change up the name.