[hider=Lasersquid112][indent][indent]The layout of the character sheet is a bit difficult to decipher with some inconsistencies here and there -- not just in comparison to Calle's sheet. There are several typos, but it is not something to get too huffy and puffy about. The read is pretty quick and interesting. There is a good sense of his action-y personality and backstory to be enjoyed through the nature of your sheet. Even if Anarast does not have a pirate nickname, I would not want to mess with him. His reasoning for becoming a pirate can use some dusting, and the few backstories you offer for his history are interesting and add to his persona. He is obviously very swashbuckling but he is also chaotic, which has already been addressed in another critique. For such a reason, I will not honey badger you over that, but I will mention that the chaos makes me question my willingness to accept him under the Character Tab.[/indent][/indent][/hider] [hider=Calle][indent][indent]The layout of your sheet is fairly tidy and straight forward. Nelly seems like a sweet girl, but I would have rejected her for being too blatantly female -- even if the sheet explains the circumstances. Her reasoning for wanting to become a pirate is also lacking. This character fits into a more fantastic realm, which bends the rules from how I am interpreting them. On that note, if I was GMing a more nautical fantasy game where the rules of the time period are quaint and whimsical, I would have taken her and given you my vote. (Every boat wants a good, cute cook! [sub][sup]❤️[/sup][/sub])[/indent][/indent][/hider] [hider=Briza's Vote][indent][indent]When this Contest was posted, I was expecting Character Sheet that had desscriptions, which involved more in depth backgrounds about the characters and their faulty childhood rearing, the crime(s) they committed to bring them aboard, the family or friends or acquaintances they no longer see, the deal they signed with the captain, the laws of their ship, and their relationship with the captain and other crew members. But, as someone who only made it past finding a face claim, a name, a nickname, and small personality traits for this Contest, I should not be a meany-head. So, I apologize. [center][hider=(⌒▽⌒ゞ💬][@Lasersquid112][/hider][/center][/indent][/indent][/hider]