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The only one out of my [s]six[/s] massively sprawling list of content he didn't like was the only scene with "action" in it. As little action as there may have been. 

I am taking this to mean that I should never include any action in future posts. Only introspection and internal monologues.
Furthermore, he has liked the one where there wasn't a single line of dialogue. My protagonists will now be mute. 

I'm doing this for you, Michael. <3
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He's poking fun and now I feel self concious about being self concious.

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