[quote=@Compulsive86] [quote=@HachiRoku] Not the GM but it'd probably help to update some things and repost it, just so nobody has to scroll all the way back. [quote=@Sola] Not to my knowledge. It'd probably be best to do as [@HachiRoku] said too. [/quote] Will do!! [hider=My Hider] (Still no picture, I wish I had one!) [color=92278f]Quote:[/color] “I can hear you, I just don’t care.” [color=92278f]Name[/color]: Hisakawa Hisashi [color=92278f]Age[/color]: 14 December 18th 2003 [color=92278f]Gender[/color]: Boy [color=92278f]Orientation[/color]: Homoromantic, asexual [color=92278f]Social Class:[/color] Middle class [color=92278f]Defining Hobby:[/color] Baking [color=92278f]Occupation:[/color] None [color=92278f]Physical Description:[/color] Height, 5 feet 6 inches, weight, 150 lb, Hair color, very light purple, hair length/style, it goes down to the bottom of his shoulder blades and is slightly fluffy his bangs are swept to the left side of his face and are even fluffier than the rest of his hair. Eye color, light blue, Eye shape, slanted, skin, pale, body build, lanky, all his limbs are rather long and haunty. Head shape, oval (slightly pointy chin), Hands, he has rather long fingers, normal outfit, when not in school he wears baggy sweatshirts and skinny jeans in winter and loose fitting t-shirts and skinny jeans. Body modifications, his ears are pierced with black metal studs. [color=92278f]Personality Traits:[/color] When you think of Hisashi think of a cat. He appears aloof and uncaring most of the time because honestly, he has better things to think about then the world around him. He prefers his own inner world then the outside one. His head is always constantly thinking of millions of different things so he finds hard to communicate; he also appears to lack empathy and can come off as rather rude due to missing social cues. However, don’t let this stop you from trying to get close, deep down Hisashi is extremely loyal towards those he loves and is extremely passionate. He may not know how express his deep love for people and he may not know what love exactly is but he tries to show it the best he can in his own awkward way. His blunt attitude has a way of keeping people calm and putting things in a different perspective. He is also much more tolerant then it would first appear; taking in people’s differences with ease and not expecting them to change or be what society deems as “normal”. [color=92278f]Likes:[/color] Baking anime/manga Drawing Cats American rock music [color=92278f]Dislikes[/color] Social gatherings School Smoking Loud noises Violence [color=92278f]Home Life:[/color] In total, Hisashi has three younger sisters ranging in ages from two to twelve. Besides that he has a mother, Dr. Hisakawa who divorced his father when he was around five and now lives with her life partner Hinta Sato. They are generally a very open and loving family except for Hisashi himself and his birth mother; both tend to struggle with being openly loving. Overall though, the family is an accepting and warm household. [color=92278f]Personal Motivation:[/color] When Hisashi grows up he plans to go to France to study pastry, after that he will set up a cafe back in Japan, where he can spend the rest of his days exploring new recipes. His highschool goals however, are much simpler. He wants to learn how to be independent from his family before he leaves them in four years. [color=92278f]Miscellaneous[/color]: https://www.webmd.com/brain/autism/high-functioning-autism https://www.webmd.com/children/sensory-processing-disorder [color=92278f]Relationships:[/color] No romantic relationships as of yet but Hisashi is very close to his mother’s partner Hinta who he calls “Mama Hinta” while he calls his mother “mother” [color=92278f]Belongings & Inventory:[/color] Hisashi always has noise canceling headphones around his neck and has sunglasses in his pocket at all times. [color=92278f]Other Information:[/color] Hisashi is well versed in English due to his love of American rock music. Also, while he may not seem the type, Hisashi is very good with children; in fact he loves children and taking care of them in anyway possible; although at times he may need help. [/hider] [/quote] You'll have to wait for [@Inkarnate] to fully review your CS, but let me add some pointers. 1) Appearance [indent]The appearance section still needs some work. As it stands currently, it feels like a rough summary rather than something fluid. I get what he looks like, but it's missing that "descriptive flair" that everyone else has for their character's appearance. I also believe that Japanese high schools have rules in regards to piercings in general, but you would have to check in with Ink about it.[/indent] 2) Miscellaneous [indent]You have two miscellaneous sections. One is labeled "miscellaneous," while the other is "other information." Please use the latter as it was provided with the CS template and combine the information.[/indent] 3) Disorders [indent]I really wish you would describe his disorders rather than link what he has. Is his personality a result of it, or is Hisashi naturally like that? More importantly, when/how did he get diagnosed?[/indent] 4) Home Life [indent]I've heard divorce in Japan is generally looked down upon. Perhaps adding a touch about how the divorce affected the family and their feelings regarding it would be a good touch.[/indent] I'd also double-check with Ink if your purple is readable. It's fine on my screen, but dark colors on gray don't always mesh well. [quote=@Skelace] I'm just gonna slide this in here before it's too late... [hider=Shiko!] [center] [img]https://i.imgur.com/65cQC03.png[/img] [img]https://i.pinimg.com/564x/72/26/8d/72268d43f0d04c6b2789d06d31cd425e.jpg[/img] [color=f7941d] [b]“Dwawww! What’s not to love!?”[/b][/color][/CENTER][h3][color=85B3C4]Overview[/color][/h3][hr][sub][color=85B3C4][b]Name[/b][/color][/sub] [color=f7941d][indent]Nishihara Shiko[/indent][/color] [sub][color=85B3C4][b]Age[/b][/color][/sub] [color=f7941d][indent]14 March 17 2004[/indent][/color] [sub][color=85B3C4][b]Gender[/b][/color][/sub] [color=f7941d][indent]Male[/indent][/color] [sub][color=85B3C4][b]Orientation[/b][/color][/sub] [color=f7941d][indent]Do they have a pulse?[/indent][/color] [sub][color=85B3C4][b]Social Class[/b][/color][/sub] [color=f7941d][indent]Lower Class[/indent][/color] [sub][color=85B3C4][b]Defining Hobby[/b][/color][/sub] [color=f7941d][indent]Football in the morning, track after class, life all the time? If it’s high energy Shiko’s going to be there![/indent][/color] [sub][color=85B3C4][b]Occupation[/b][/color][/sub] [color=f7941d][indent]Turning out that tasty delicious semi-passible food stuffs at a local café![/indent][/color] [h3][color=85B3C4]Characterization[/color][/h3][hr][hr][center][img]https://i.imgur.com/ZUqnJvv.gif[/img][img]https://78.media.tumblr.com/fb30574777dfd08fc6d4a34cc93f688d/tumblr_mqo1kwQXUb1sqcz4do1_500.gif[/img][img]https://i.imgur.com/AQfIrhu.gif[/img][/center][hr][hr][sub][color=85B3C4][b]Physical Description[/b][/color][/sub] [color=f7941d][indent]Coming in at a whopping 163 centimeters, and about 57kg (depends on the time of day) Shiko is easily described as a bumbling joyous mess. A head of pink hair lays atop a goofy smile that remains about the only consistent thing about the boy. His clothes hang about his body limply often being a size too large which he claims is to help with air flow. Whenever caught outside on his personal time Shiko will likely be wearing a pair of combat boots that were never bothered to be tied up. [/indent][/color] [sub][color=85B3C4][b]Personality Traits[/b][/color][/sub] [indent][list][*] [color=f7941d]Energetic[/color] [*] [color=f7941d]Friendly[/color] [*] [color=f7941d]Pumped![/color] [*] [color=f7941d]Shenanigans![/color] [*] [color=f7941d]Oblivious[/color] [*] [color=f7941d]Clingy[/color] [*] [color=f7941d]Brash[/color] [*] [color=f7941d]Persistent[/color] [*] [color=f7941d]Borderline Inappropriate[/color] [/list][/indent] [sub][color=85B3C4][b]Likes[/b][/color][/sub] [indent][color=008800]✔[/color] [color=f7941d]Competition[/color] [color=008800]✔[/color] [color=f7941d]Outdoors[/color] [color=008800]✔[/color] [color=f7941d]Laughter[/color] [color=008800]✔[/color] [color=f7941d]Spices[/color] [color=008800]✔[/color] [color=f7941d]Getting it on the hundredth and first time[/color] [color=008800]✔[/color] [color=f7941d]Chemistry[/color] [color=008800]✔[/color] [color=f7941d]Sports[/color] [color=008800]✔[/color] [color=f7941d]Cosplay[/color][/indent] [sub][color=85B3C4][b]Dislikes[/b][/color][/sub] [indent][color=FF0000]✘[/color] [color=f7941d]Boredom[/color] [color=FF0000]✘[/color] [color=f7941d]Car Rides[/color] [color=FF0000]✘[/color] [color=f7941d]Sleep[/color] [color=FF0000]✘[/color] [color=f7941d]Quiting[/color] [color=FF0000]✘[/color] [color=f7941d]Animals[/color] [color=FF0000]✘[/color] [color=f7941d]Bugs[/color] [color=FF0000]✘[/color] [color=f7941d]Allergies[/color] [color=FF0000]✘[/color] [color=f7941d]Texting[/color][/indent] [sub][color=85B3C4][b]Home Life[/b][/color][/sub] [indent][color=f7941d]The Nishihara family used to live out in the countryside when Shiko was much younger, and the boy still recalls many fond memories of it. Mainly those involving his parents taking him out to play for what seemed like all day in the sun. Since then however Nishihara Shimizu was forced to relocate his family to the city where he and his wife spend most of their time working. Despite this the family remains quite happy, at least in the eyes of Shiko. Every opportunity they have to be together is filled with laughter and smiles.[/color][/indent] [sub][color=85B3C4][b]Personal Motivation[/b][/color][/sub] [indent][color=f7941d]Ho’ boy! There’s so much that needs done! Where to start? There’s actually getting to play on the Track and Football clubs. Actually learn how to cook something that tastes edible? Save up for something other than a flip phone. Keep up with his grades. Find a friend that he doesn’t burn out? That’d be a nice one. His biggest goal of all though, is to get his grades up so that he can actually go to university for chemistry.[/color] [/indent] [h3][color=85B3C4]Miscellaneous[/color][/h3][hr][sub][color=85B3C4][b]Relationships[/b][/color][/sub] [indent][color=f7941d]Sending out PMs!.[/color][/indent] [sub][color=85B3C4][b]Belongings & Inventory[/b][/color][/sub] [indent][list][*][color=f7941d]A cruddy old vintage flip phone.[/color] [*][color=f7941d]House keys on a lanyard.[/color] [*][color=f7941d]His wallet that’s filled with scraps of paper he uses as reminders and notes.[/color][/list][/indent] [sub][color=85B3C4][b]Other Information[/b][/color][/sub] [indent][color=f7941d]VA: Vic Mignonga? Translations and voice actors might not be my thing >_>'[/color] [/indent] [hr][hr][center][img]https://pa1.narvii.com/6439/e59a42b86ed8cbd9b195aa4540151c3c2cf2a3a2_hq.gif[/img][img]https://media.giphy.com/media/VziJ88bs3c2kg/giphy.gif[/img][/center][hr][hr] [/hider] [/quote] Well, Kotone has a track buddy now. :lol Anyway, my only concerns is the amount of gifs and the football club. [hider=Especially this section] [img]https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/428770040276582400/480114314431430676/unknown.png[/img] [/hider] In regards to the football club, I'm not really sure if Japan is really into football. I know they love baseball, but I've never heard of anything major about football. I think they might play rugby, but I'd have to look into some research about it.