[@MorningStar1399] Shy and I have gone through his sheet and it's mostly good, except for a couple of minor things-

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1. Since metal can't just come out of thin air, we were wondering the scope of his ability to change the size of metal. Shy suggested a 10% change in either direction as a limit, which also allows for mild change in density

2. Both of us are a bit iffy on the part "can change the temperature of metal so it burns the bearer or becomes too cold to comfortably carry; he is immune to these changes"; changing temp is fine, but Alex wouldn't be immune to feeling the temp changes. Shy suggested that as an alternative strategy, he could possibly change the temperature of half an iron rod or whatever, so that he could still hold it and then whack people with the charged end (:D)

3. Shy pointed out that the first big paragraph of the bio could be potentially triggering to some people, and I'm inclined to agree with her. Would you be okay with re-wording it? Maybe hint/imply that all that shit happened but not outright state? Or include a TW? IDK I'm not good at TW stuff lol

4. Is Alex's spy network an open secret, or more "hidden"?

5. Shy pointed out that if he kept his last name and took over his dad's factory, most people probs would know who his parents were[/hider]

Would you mind editing post a lil? HMU if you have questions about anything up there <3