[@bloonewb] Alright cool! [quote=@MorningStar1399] [hider=notes reply] 1/2. I don't know what I'm doing when it comes to this world; there is so much and I legit just made shit up...and copy/pasted from the old thing. None of his abilities ever end up being used anyway. 3. How am I supposed to insinuate the stuff that happened...like...there also really isn't a spot for trigger warning unless I put it beneath the clicky bit... 4. I have no idea how his spy network works; you made that, not me. 5. What I mean to say is he's essentially gone through and made his name more popular than his father's, so no one really thinks of his father when they think of Amidale. [/hider] I love him, but I love his personality and his eccentricity more than anything...and nothing else about him makes any sense in general. Plus what the hell is the point in having a character that is markedly similar to someone else's, esp. if they point it out, and extra esp. if that person is the mod? It seems kinda tacky. IDK if it's the late hour making me all depressed and hating my stuff, or if I'm actually realizing the fact that Alexander is a shit-ily written character now that things have actually been pointed out, but I'm really not seeing enough of a reason to actually use him. He's really not useful to the plot anyway. Like, what good can he do in the whole overarching plot that has been established? He really can't. He's just comedic relief. That's a terribly-written character if they're only good for a flat purpose. :-/ [/quote] You could put the TW just right under the line that says "bio", maybe? like in ( ) ? And how his spy network works is up to you! I intentionally left that part open on PV so that whoever wrote Alex could decide for themselves and gotcha about the name thingy I can assure you with 200000% confidence that he's a great character who has tons of use for plot purposes! <3