[@Lotrix Molick] Looks hella refined now writing-wise. A bit hard to read because there's only single enters instead of double enters. You're good to move her to the char tab and start, just remember to add a few extra enters so it's easier on the eyes. accidentally hit post so you don't get pinged by this, big oofie [@Phantomlink959] Yes, Worm is the hooded guy alone. He's an unfamiliar face to all of you. He's not in the character tab yet because nothing about him is really known at this point, besides that he's called worm and is cloaked. Also don't worry about length. "Judge a man not by the length of his 'post' but the quality." Abraham Lincoln said that.