[@Dutchess Sarah] Sorry for the delayed response, Blue is busy this week and asked me to look things over - 

[list][*]The age/birth date is wrong, as the RP begins in October 1983
[*]He has too many powers, especially with one as strong as Chlorokinesis.... Two powers is the limit
[*]Death can't be used as a fear, since everyone is afraid of death and that's assumed
[*]"Fluent in English, loves Germanic languages" <--- Doesn't need English as a skill unless it's not his first language 
[*]Too many items under possessions - believe the max is 10. Remember, this is what they generally own/have on them.
[*]Mutants most likely wouldn't have been taught in school - since this is when basically mutants were universally hated and feared. Not a subject that public school or even private would have brought up. Don't ask don't tell would have been their best case scenario.
[*]Since this is 1983, Xavier hasn't established his school yet...
[*]Believe you're missing something under the anything else [/list]