[quote=@CollectorOfMyst] [@Mae] >Aaron stays put, but he will scavenge the room he's in. >Jamie bites her lip, wanting to make sure they have everyone before they go deeper inside. In reference to the new character avatars: Actually, I feel like you made both of their faces a little bit too wide ^^; Most everything is good, but if I could beg a few changes? [hider=Jamie Edits] Her hair is a bit... voluminous. If you could take away the bit to the lower left of her cheek, and then make it so that her braid goes behind her neck, essentially concealing the thicker parts. That should deal with the volume problem. As I said, her head looks a little too wide, and her jaw is a lot sharper than I thought - maybe soften that out a little? [/hider] [hider=Aaron Edits] In the original description, I mention that Aaron looks young, and I envisioned him as somewhat unassuming. He looks a little thuggish in the new design. I'd prefer if his eyes were closer together, his mouth was smaller, or his nose was more along the lines of Dahlia or Dan. [/hider] I'm sorry to ask all this of you, and you're the artist, ultimately. I also don't want you to prioritise this over letting everyone have fun - and I probably sound very picky which counts against me, I'm sure. [/quote] It's no worries, and it certainly doesn't count against you :P After finishing Luciel's update I will be taking a bit of a break from sprites to work on more behind the scenes map stuff, since once I get that done it'll be finished permanently. Would you mind if I get to it next week at the latest?