[@Mag Lev]
Looks good so far. Approved.

[@Shiyonichi]
Same as a above.

We'll hash out the connections part as more people post their CS.

[@Nerdy Reference]
I really like the detailing on the rifle in your character's image. 

On a related note, I have mixed feelings about allowing guns. I know CZ2128 Delta had an assault rifle or something, but that was a rarity, even in Yggdrasil as I understand it ([@Shiyonichi] feel free to correct me on this). Magic could probably enhance bows and crossbows to be as powerful or more powerful than guns.
On the flip side, I don't really see much of a problem with it. Power scaling is pretty arbitrary considering that players and immortals are insanely strong. The existence of guns matter about as much as the existence of salad dressing, and I'm capable enough to include it in the lore.

Fuck it. Keep the rifle. We'll say it's about as advanced as a musket or something. It looks cool anyway.

Oh yeah. And your character is approved.