[quote=@Lord Wraith] [@AndyC], I really enjoyed that latest Superman post. The dynamic between Lois and Clark is coming off really natural which I find lends itself to the immersion of the first person perspective. At first I wasn't a huge fan of the idea that Lois was aware of Clark's true identity so early on but as I read each new post I can see why the decision was made and I think it helps enforce the idea that Lois Lane is a Pulitzer Winning Investigative Journalist instead of it being more of an informed attribute like in some media. [/quote] Thanks, man. I've always struggled with writing the Lois and Clark relationship in its early stages, so I figured this time I wouldn't bother trying to plan things out and just go where the banter takes them. I always figured Lois should know early on if not immediately, mostly because it makes her look dumb if she's the one person who spends more time around Clark in both of his personae than anyone else and she can't put two and two together, and also because I feel like the whole "keeping a secret identity is really hard" angle is something better suited for a character like Spidey. Besides, Lois is a lot more fun to write if she's a partner-in-crime than if she's trying to balance between being a love interest and a pseudo-antagonist making Clark's life more difficult.