[@Pirouette]
Shiyonichi pointed out the only thing I would have mentioned.

While this is something you do [i]not[/i] need to reveal, I'm really curious which country or region Faire came from. The Steaming Sea isn't a friendly place, so wherever she disembarked from would need to have skilled sailors... probably one of the few foreign merchant vessels.

Anyway, it looks good. Accepted. ;)

[@Kangutso]
Haha, lurk as much as you like. There are already a few who do that. Tell them I said "hi". xD

Oh! I wanted to let you and [@Archangel89] know that another slot has opened up due to inactivity.