[@FallenTrinity] Hey! Shy and I went over your CS and we just have a few things we'd like to address <3 [hider=stuff] 1. Most importantly, are you still going with the backstory you discussed with me over PM? If so, I would prefer you include it somewhere in her bio 2. And if the above is the case, Madame Geraldine's teachers are [i]probably[/i] aware of it. We can work out how/why/their reactions later 3. For her nickname (Lady Vera), where/how did this come about if she's not openly noble? 4. How'd she manage to attend the Polytechnique Institute while she was in school? I'm totally fine with this detail, but both Shy and I would just like a little clarification on it 5. Who are the Bets, and the Sanduhrs? 6. Would you mind making the bio a bit more specific-what she's been doing after she graduated, any important events, etc, etc [/hider] If you have any questions at all please feel free to ask! Me and [@shylarah] are always willing to help <3 <3 <3