[@Arawak]I know this is a prototype sheet of yours so I take what I see with a grain of salt. Still, there are a few things I'd point out for your full sheet to consider. I begin with the style, while I don't enforce the format outlined in the guide for the sake of easier navigation I'd prefer if you'd use these categories: General Information, Society, Technology and Military. Again, for the ease of leaders you could also make the titles of the categories stand out by using h1 or h2 tags for header sized text. Now back to the categories and this could be perhaps my second point. You need some sorts of general introduction to your faction so even after reading a short paragraph people understand the core concept of your race. History can be also included as a subcategory of general information but it isn't necessary. Next is Social and you did write the most about this (both Beliefs and Structure belong here). Although you might wish to restructure this to a clearer form because currently when I want to know something about your society, I have to fish out the details through several paragraphs to just get an idea. Social classes in particular should be listed or at least organized in order so people can get that. Tech might need some expansion upon and of course you also need to fill in stuff for the military. Combat in these games is relatively common thus it is recommended that people get a general idea how you fight.

[@DisturbedSpec]As I said before, try making the titles for categories stand out by using the header text (h1 or h2). You find guides for this below the text box you write your hosts in named "Formatting Cheatsheet" and a "Toggle" button next to it. Alright, moving on. You are a human faction and as such you'd need to discuss few details with other human factions like Arawak and Star Lord, if you haven't already. As posthumans though you'd need to write some detail about your various sapient species. We aren't expecting much, often even one or two sentences are enough. Just give some food for players who wish to describe their first impressions when meeting your races. I know that your sheet is still incomplete so I don't talk about the rest.

[@thedman]Hmm, I say you have all the neccessities for a fully functional nationsheet. Slightly on the brief side but even then you included the essentials for others to know about your faction. I might expand the notable technologies portion a bit to mention your energy production (if unique) and FTL drives but even that wouldn't be that important. As such I say your sheet is approved.

[@Brithwyr]Looking good, your sheet is of course incomplete and some categories need extensions but so far it's fine. If I have one suggestion it's that maybe you can own multiple gates. With seven system even the possession of 2-3 gates would be not out of question. Of course with hypernodes it is possible to extend your territory so even one gate can make sense. It is up to you.