[quote=@Ambra]
[@Hero] I feel like my major problem is that there's no age-range in her Bio. How old was she when her brother left? How old was she when the bandits attacked the cart? How old was she when she joined the guild? Etc.

Who is Guiding Star? You never mentioned who they were. 
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I'll make sure to fix the age thing, then.

Guiding Star is an NPC in the crafting quest in Mor Dhona, I'll make sure to be more specific with that, too.