[@Lonewolf685]

Alright...so I to look up who Tobi is and I sorta agree and I can make changes to make it so it's easier to fight it but I'd say she's closer to Kisame than anyone else

The blood manipulation ability is exactly as it describes a self-imposed buff and blood flow is a good chunk of adrenaline, in fact, the way it is written is the exact method in which the human body triggers the rush in itself. To make it easier to understand the ability is the exact same as Monkey D. Luffy from One Piece's gear second skill

And the curse is it really all that different than a blessing if you switch the viewpoints? For example, if I called the ability Tidal's eye and structured the wording to be more like a blessing would you still say the same thing even though it sounds more light-hearted?  

everything else...is understandable and I'll change it though the backstory is the core of the character and its personality I'll have to delete her and make a new one if it can't be kept mostly intact