[@Mistory] Still not very wrathful but seems fine. However mind if I give you a suggestion which can be actually quite nice? This is not the first time I run this rp actually, but the last one failed miserably because of inner drama, anyways. The Wrath we had back there, had this interesting plot where he actually fought against his anger and tried to supress it with all that he could. I imagined this could work for your character too, since he's mostly kind and all, he could be always holding himself or something like that. But of course, it's just a suggestion, if you want to keep as it is, it's perfectly fine.