[@Ezekiel] Hmm, alright. I'll endeavour to wow you with my CS. Gonna need to do some revamping. It's solid right meow, other than some awkward wording here and there, but I need to solidify the 'why' of my character. At the moment there's an awful lot on his parents, but I think the 'why' of his personality needs fleshing out. Unless I made his parents the why... K off to do some writing!