Sounds really good to me. I love the way that you limited his power to were he has to work for the magic he does. I think that is what I love so much about our creepsomeness! We both put so much work into our characters that we even care to limit them. Instead of like some people who happily give their characters too much power. But yes he totally makes sense to me! One question though, you said that he can't trap living things? But he can still summon them yes? Or was you thinking that it would be an magical item that will bring him/her into the picture?.