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[center][color=6ecff6][h3]Eric Northman[/h3][/color]

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[color=6ecff6]"Friends and enemies have little difference. They both can stab you in the back, but at least the enemy is honest about it."[/color]

Nickname
Sheriff

Age
32

Appearance
Eric is an impressive height of 6'10". He is built very well, yet fir some reason weighs less than he should.

Biography
	A soldier with a cold heart, Eric only knows his job and his wants. He was born in the Maria wall, and became a recruit at age 14. He graduated on time and became a member of the garrison regiment. He spent the years before the event increasing in rank and making connections.
	He enjoyed his time as a member of the garrison regiment. He didn't have to do much but keep an eye out. If only he knew it wouldn't last long.	

Personality
	Eric is a cold and calculating soldier. He always knows when the moment to strike is, and knows how to do it. His social skills with people can be limited, but he still has friends in all sorts of places. He loves booze and games, but he never forgets his duty. He is always on guard, no matter the situation.

Statistics
You have 50 points to distribute as desired. Should reflect your character's appearance.
• Physical Strength: 24
• Speed: 11
• Teamwork: 0
• Leadership: 4
• Skill (Gear): 11[/center]
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I have several issues with this character sheet.

First and foremost, this roleplay is focusing on a group of kids that survived Shiganshina and the downfall of Wall Maria, who later join the Cadets and eventually join the Survey Corps after Trost happens. As Eric is not only thirty-two years old, but already a graduated member of the Garrison, you would be hard pressed to fit in the character you made. Secondly, Eric is abnormally tall. Whilst we already have tall characters and I personally wouldn't mind another one, the fact that he is 6'10'' in a psuedo-medieval setting bothers me. Finding a 6'10'' person in a medieval-esque setting (even with all the guns and fancy titan-slaying gear) is just as likely as finding a 7' Japanese kid--something I've seen previously on this site.

As for the biography, I know the sheet is lax when it comes to length, but that isn't much of a backstory at all. Additionally, the first sentence of it is a personality trait rather than something to do with his biography. The same goes for the personality; it is rather bland. You keep addressing that Eric is "cold and caculating," but you never mentioned why he is like this. What caused him to act so coldly? Also, the "always knows when to strike and how to do it" segment sounds undeniably like godmodding. Even if the nape is always the killing blow for any titan, no one knows when the time is to strike 100% of the time.

Finally, I need to address the statistics section. Eric has 24 strength, and while the sheet says you can distribute as desired, that's also an abnormal number. The average person has probably around 10 or so in each statistic (outside gear, since that's from military training), and 24 strength is an extreme--too extreme. As for his 0 in teamwork, this is partly my fault as I haven't edited the CS in sometime. I have decided that everyone needs at least one point in each stat, so it would need to be changed just like the 24 Eric has in strength.

In addition to the multiple spelling and/or grammar errors in the sheet, I'll have to respectfully decline Eric.