[quote=@iKatamalicious]
Hey Balth I went ahead and described the inside of the gym, I hope it's ok? I wasn't really sure if there was something you specifically had in mind... I can edit if need be, though!
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There is no need to edit anything, but at the same time, I feel like you left the area feeling a little barren. I picture the training area to be a mixture of Earth and Grass types. There should be more plant life than what you described. Again, nobody needs to edit anything. I'm picturing some patches of grass in the room as well as some modest shrubs and small trees. In other words, the reason why plants weren't mentioned in your posts is because they weren't flowers or anything eye catching; they're just plain green vegetation.

[quote=@iKatamalicious]
I was also wondering, should Margo also have a rival since Dan and Indy do? 
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[quote=@prettydrops]
ooh, actually, i was thinking of adding my own npc just for fun. if it's okay with [@iKatamalicious] and [@Balthazar007] i'd like to drum up a profile for a breeder rival! since the character would only be popping up on occasions (maybe travel with jack and jill, even) I think I could handle it!
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I don't feel like Margo NEEDS a rival, but if you WANT a rival, that can be arranged. Prettydrops can create this character if they want, BUT I don't want that character to travel with Jack and Jill. Those two are too close to one another and too jaded by others to allow someone to travel with them... unless we can find a VERY GOOD REASON why they would let someone travel with them. One idea that comes to mind would be that one of their parent's assigned this "other" person to travel with them (sort of as a babysitter / guardian).

And [@TheForgottenArc]: Sorry I haven't given this new character a sheet yet. That will be in my next post which I'm working on now. It will be up within two hours or less.