Well all is nice but-
More text is needed. Sorry but this is a Casual level RP and the amount of text is just to small even for my standards. Add more stuff, especially bio an personality wise, feel free to use the stuff you told me about in the PM.
No need to hidde skills, after all (I hope) we are all enough good & experienced RPers and will not use OOC knowledge in the IC.

As it is I have no problems with what you put, but this is quite a small amount of info for a CS so ...