[quote=@Lmpkio] Alright - I edited Terratoria to be simply Hyperion's Palace. I think it should be fine now. [/quote] [quote=@A Lowly Wretch] [@Lmpkio] - I've read over it and it's quite good. I personally don't see any issues with the state it's at now. [/quote] Wait, I'm not seeing the edits for some reason? I'd like to review it before we give this the OK, even though I'm not the GM. The reason being as the God of Law, Gammaton's influence should be an absolute prerequisite when it comes to the first cities and establishment of governments. Right now, it is my belief that gods simply have small cult villages, with Hayim having the most followers, not only because he directly [s]interferes[/s] helps them, but that his general blessing has such a beneficial impact in their lives. As far as I see it, Dirka has a small sorcerer's cult, Iva has one tribe, Hayim has multiple tribes spread out, Ragnagedon has a tribe of marauders, Ral has a small tribe, Ferron is just about to create dwarves, and Anu has a group of monsters. That should be the extent of it, any higher-level organization should be a joint venture with Gammaton, otherwise it should take a lot of time and energy to form. Besides, light is not order, light is not the antithesis to chaos, light is not civilization or government. Part of the fun of a god game is the creation aspect. The name, 'Tabrasa', is obviously taken from the previous incarnation of this RP, 'Tabula Rasa', which means 'clean slate', starting from nothing. We should take the time to build up from limited resources, creating things bit by bit and seeing how other players react to the things we've created. Gammaton lives in a frickin' anthill for crying out loud, and isn't going to pop out an advanced civilization without consulting and collaborating with the other gods first because I recognize that advanced civilizations are inherently overpowered and therefore cannot be the work of a single god. Anyways, just my two cents. At this point I'm thinking there needs to be considerably more scrutiny before more gods are accepted. The criteria should be more than just 'does it step on the toes of the underlying lore'. I'm not angry, and I'm sorry if I sound anal, but I made the god of bureaucracy for a reason (because I'm anal and a stickler for proper procedure). Also thanks to everyone else who jumped on this sooner than me.