[@mnkee] Okay, here are my comments....[list] [*]His name - so he wouldn't actually have a middle name, being from the Land of Long Nights. His name would just be Tristan Alvissen. The name Tristan would be very unusual for the Royal Family, since that name is Celtic - and honestly fits in better with the Castle - but you can keep it as Tristan as long as [i]why[/i] he has such an odd name is explained in his history. [*]Since he's 15, I'm going to veto Ax Fighting. General Fighting and Sword Fighting is enough. [*]Falconry - the ability to hunt wild animals in their natural state and habitat by means of a trained bird of prey. [*]The gift for Princess Luna needs to be specified in his possessions [*]Get rid of the axe - that's already a lot of heavy stuff on him [*]In residence, the other gift for Luna needs to be specified [*]Get rid of the battle axes [*]In his history, all of the references to knights and squires...The Land of Long Nights wouldn't have that sort of system. They would have members of the palace guard and then warriors. Since remember....vikings. (Think the Marvel [i]Thor[/i] films if that helps) [*]In his history, you mention addressing the fort - he can have had to address his father, King Alvis, or the Council of Elders - basically his dad's top warriors and advisors [*] [/list]