Right now is about 6am for me, and I'm past my bed time. So Herald, give me a time where you can be on your computer for a few hours, and I'll see what we can work up.

Lord Pie if you can jump into the collab I don't think Herald would mind. Though since it's his turn to post he'll kind of be 'controlling' and we'll be more 'reacting'.

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Also I have to agree with Pie, loveable rogue indeed. Though, might I suggest two quick edits?

It would be helpful to have a transitional line clarifying that Vaerun actually left the dark recesses of the Abyss Labyrinth beneath the castle and went outside.

And the hole "five men abreast" is probably about 6-8 feet. Anything bigger than that and the things I would unleash would kill us all right here and now :P