[quote=@Altered Tundra]
[@tobiax] While nothing too terribly wrong in its current state, I would ask adding some more detail to the appearance, personality, and history sections, which each should be at least two paragraphs per the information stated in the CS skeletons themselves. The Misc section also needs to be filled out. Also, if you wouldn't mind, please put some kind of character quote. 
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Sorry to double post, but all issues should be addressed now.