I was anticipating my character to end up losing/having someone discover then take and destroy the [s]mcguffin[/s] paper. Which I suppose I could still possibly lose on my way, I'd just need to think of way for that to happen. Because actually finding a trail is much too kind for my character's progress. ;P Especially, now that I'll likely try to learn more and find out how to track [@13org] (your) character. Which would make a lot more sense narratively if I lose my lead, which would make my character more desperate for help. Since she wants her goal, and she's clearly not going to get any help from those in 'The Fortress.' (If anything, it will continue to be an active hindrance.) [i]*And you can just control the unconscious character yourself if needed, or I can collab a few answers/paragraghs if desired*[/i] Actually, as a future concept, assuming the person their seeking is still alive. (or at that point hasn't been brainwashed or if he somehow never existed or isn't a person but its some kind of AI program or whatever may have happened.) it would be a neat and very story-like moment if somehow the discovery of such is somehow discovered by every (presumably still living) character at the same time. But I guess that's depending on how long and ultimately significant the discovery of the character actually is. (And if it ends up being the main plot. Or just the end of 'Act 1.' so to speak. Etc.) I'm doing something this weekend, but I'll aim to start writing a post tomorrow and post it. (At the latest the day after, during down time.)