[quote=@tobiax] I can be a bit minimalist, yeah. That or I sort of overdo it. I tend to like to let my IC work do the talking and leave room for character development stuff if I don't have any seeds in mind already. Oh, I didn't notice that about the colors. I thought the entire thing was formatted grey in the example. Okay- I can understand how it all being one color may or may not make it harder to read like that. Okay, nested hider is go. I guess I never looked at the full length of everything to see that it was a bit unwieldly. Oh, when I read the "please link Digimon images instead of embedding them", I thought that applied for, like, everything. (Or that having Diego an Dodomon in one image would suffice) So now I did all the stuff. Hopefully it's all in order. [/quote] Oh that's totally fine if you like to let your IC talking take hold of the main conversation for ya. I just wasn't sure what your reasons were. In hindsight, I shoulda just asked. :lol but yeah, on my end it looks good. Gonna wait for Hero to speak before accepting. And that's my bad, honestly. I should've been a bit more specific regarding the color formatting. And as for the digimon, image linking the rookie form seems to fit the best because, well, they're likely to be in that form the most when they're not in champ/ult/mega forms. [quote=@SleepingSilence] [@Altered Tundra] Will do that for my digimon sheet. And that's certainly an odd request to have my character have less personality... My character's personality was structured based on positive to neutral to negative, (broadly speaking) in terms of character traits. If I cut the latter half, the character will have no real flaws. :P Her past, her hang ups and the adoption make her a complicated character. If other characters wanted to explore it, surely other characters would still do it and learn from it in their own ways? I intended to smooth her out with a little bit of time, so she wouldn't always be quite as quirky. But allow me to take a look and I'll try my best to edit/iron out the personality section. (Have friends over, so may not get to it straight away. Will @ again when I've completed and wish you to look it over.) [/quote] When I had a look over Izzy's personality, at least to me, I've found the first two paragraphs told us about her negative traits in just enough detail to satisfy. She's smart, there's no denying that, but there's also a certain stubborn arrogance about her, too. A will that won't quit that, in your own words, can lead to reckless behavior. I think this is the definition of knowledge for her. She doesn't lack intellectual knowledge, but on a personal level and knowing when and how to act is another side of knowledge's two-sided coin that, with the help of friends and life experience, she'll learn her limits and that it takes the knowledge of live to know what your limits are. Does that sound like a fair analysis of Izzy?