Alright, got some verdicts! The following characters have been [b]ACCEPTED:[/b] [URL=https://www.roleplayerguild.com/posts/4774029][COLOR=GAINSBORO][B]◼ Weston, Marcus[/B][/COLOR][/URL] [color=black][i]as portrayed by[/i][/color] [@Hillan] [URL=https://www.roleplayerguild.com/posts/4774899][COLOR=GAINSBORO][B]◼ Wenrong, Jiao-long[/B][/COLOR][/URL] [color=black][i]as portrayed by[/i][/color] [@Odin] [URL=https://www.roleplayerguild.com/posts/4773912][COLOR=GAINSBORO][B]◼ Brooks, Felix[/B][/COLOR][/URL] [color=black][i]as portrayed by[/i][/color] [@Lionhearted] [URL=https://www.roleplayerguild.com/posts/4775359][COLOR=GAINSBORO][B]◼ Whäner, Esther[/B][/COLOR][/URL] [color=black][i]as portrayed by[/i][/color] [@Prisk] The following characters will be considered after [b]AMENDMENTS[/b]: [INDENT][URL=https://www.roleplayerguild.com/posts/4773420][COLOR=GAINSBORO][B]◼ Harper, Ivy[/B][/COLOR][/URL] [color=black][i]as portrayed by[/i][/color] [@BoyMom69035] The only issue preventing acceptance at this point is that we find the powers are almost a little on the weak side. We have concerns about Ivy being able to heal people by taking their injuries without any method to protect or heal herself. We'd like to see something added to her ability to bolster her a little bit. [URL=https://www.roleplayerguild.com/posts/4773463][COLOR=GAINSBORO][B]◼ Hope, Benjamin[/B][/COLOR][/URL] [color=black][i]as portrayed by[/i][/color] [@Aeolian] The sheet is solid but we have some concerns about the abilities and how the drawbacks feel very limited. If we're both understanding the way the powers have been described, it seems like it could be simplified to intangibility. The other thing that sticks out is that the largest drawbacks to using his power don't happen until after he finishes using it, so we'd like to see the limitations and weaknesses reworked as well. [URL=https://www.roleplayerguild.com/posts/4774410][COLOR=GAINSBORO][B]◼ Estrella, Genessy[/B][/COLOR][/URL] [color=black][i]as portrayed by[/i][/color] [@Ejected] There's two issues we found when reviewing this sheet, our primary concern however is the powers. Genessy seems quite overpowered and although strain of creating clones is mentioned, we're not exactly sure how many clones she can create before feeling that strain. The entire process is a little on the vague side and Roman and I both feel as though two to three clones should be her max production rate especially at this point. Additionally, neither of us like how the Hive Mind shifts when the 'Host' body dies as it makes her feel somewhat invincible. The second issue is that her personality feels contradictive. On one hand, she's a social butterfly but on the other hand, she's a introvert and stand offish. It just feels like two conflicting personalities, which could work really well if her Hyperhuman ability was to create one duplicate thus creating a dual personality but in this case I don't know if it works.[/INDENT] Lastly the following characters are declined, Roman and I both appeciate your interest and the time you took to create character sheets but at this time we don't feel like the characters are a good fit. [URL=https://www.roleplayerguild.com/posts/4775325][COLOR=GAINSBORO][B]◼ Chan, Mei[/B][/COLOR][/URL] [color=black][i]as portrayed by[/i][/color] [@Bee] [URL=https://www.roleplayerguild.com/posts/4773248][COLOR=GAINSBORO][B]◼ Harmon, Jocelyn[/B][/COLOR][/URL] [color=black][i]as portrayed by[/i][/color] [@Almalthia] Thank you to everyone for their interest and I look forward to getting this RP going.