[quote=@Prisk] [@Aeolian] You know what's interesting? Esther's and Benjamin's conflicting family histories. It could make for a decently dramatic subplot in the story. Perhaps doubt and suspicion directed at Esther, thinking that she is or will become her father is and grand father was? Maybe there is something to dig in there. [/quote] I noticed that too; how drastically different their father relationships are. Benjamin admired his father and Esther was scarred by hers. I'm currently trying to figure out who he would be friends with. Eventhough Ben might have his suspicions of her, I imagine Esther would probably be one of his few friends since she's mute and her innate empathy allows her to understand him better than most. Also, they have the daddy thing going on. "My dad's a Mad Scientist and mentally tortured me for years." "My dad's dead." "Oh cool..." XD! Honestly though, I do see some kind of interesting dynamic between them. Whatever it may end up being. Cheers!