Yup, fight is a clusterfuck alright, and the fact that everything at the dojo isn't even happening at the same time anymore is only making things worse. Where's the cohesion, here? Instead we may as well have all the matches going on in their own self-contained universes! What if Momo got knocked to the ground, putting him right outside the Dojo? All the "DBZ time" crap would just go completely FUBAR, wouldn't it? This is what happens when you don't make sure everything that happens is happening during the same period of time. Your continuity becomes a house of cards just waiting to topple.

*sigh*

I'm sorry, I'm sorry. Feel like crap today and that's souring my mood. Also kinda lamenting my character choices quite a bit. I thought Momo would be fun to write, with the childish Buu personality and the cartoonish fighting physics. Turns out it's actually the exact opposite. You know how hard it is to write dialogue using the Buu Speech? Or how surprisingly hard it is to think of and describe the physics of a Majin's body? None of this is helped by the fact that Momo's main character arc can't actually go anywhere until Buu eventually decides to show up way down the line. Until then he's stuck in character development limbo where he won't have any real relevance until long after we all stop caring about it.