[quote=@SleepingSilence] [@Altered Tundra] So I have a simple follow up question regarding the character's personality. This isn't meant to be anything other than curiosity. Since I've already changed it to something I'm still satisfied with, merely because I was able to fit everything in a more condensed space. I was told that my character's personality was considered too expansive. "Less is more" I was told, which seems to imply its not really about depth, more so the word count. My original word count was 318, a 10 words less than your own current word count. Presuming everyone is following the same rules. I know others may also have equal/longer word counts in future, since only a minimum was described in the CS, not a specific maximum. I know (or at least have to good-faith assumption) that the intention was implying my mentally burdened character had "too much going on" though I do still intend for that character to display such quirkiness in various ways. I simply didn't bog down my personality sheet by needing to explain them. Etc etc. I don't believe I ever had a problem with repeating myself/using too similar descriptions for padding sake. I was merely focusing on detail, when it probably is better to just show it anyway. Because I still intend my character to behave strangely until the other character mellows them out a bit which will be a direct character arc I hope to achieve. I was just curious on this, now that everyone has much more time to reflect on their character sheets. I hope since one delay has already proven to be necessary, this doesn't come off in anyway other than curiosity for asking. On the off-chance that somebody doesn't post their character sheet by that point. Are we moving forward regardless? (And just hoping those will eventually get around to it?) Will we wait/be put in hiatus for other (hopefully) more active participants? Etc. Still looking forward to getting the show on the road. ^_^ Edit: And duly noted. [/quote] In the case of Izzy's personality, as compared to the others, we felt that some of the bits you included in your first draft was pouring into other avenues that didn't seem like the first two paragraphs or really reflective into the kind of girl that Izzy is. And it's fine if you still plan on having her acting that kind of way. It's not breaking her character because it's stated in the sheet, if not in a less-specific way. As As for Conrad's WC vs Izzy's, I felt the number of words I used was more than enough to explain Conrad's personality without going into either a, too much detail, or b, other characters' avenues. Though, I feel like our two characters are two totally different ones, so different strokes for different folks and all that. Regarding the current amount of characters and the two that still need to be submitted, come the 23rd, that part of your question(s) will be answered. But, regardless if we have 6, 7, or 8 by that time comes, the RP will go ahead as planned (start date currently scheduled for the week of the 23rd). a last note: never apologize for asking any questions. We welcome any and all questions. <3