[@Jay Kalton]

I prefer your character lots to the other spellcaster option, but there are some things I am not super duper on.

For starts I'm not very keen on the pocket dimensions and such. I can live with altering a broom for single transportation, but even that seems like less magey-mage and more typical witch which is not how I looked at mages and stuff here. The rest of the sheet seems OK-ish, but yeah those two might need some adjustments before acceptance.