[quote=@Briza] I have a story written. It is being edited for grammar mistakes and shall be submitted soon. However, it is probably too passive, again. [i]Ah! C'est la vie![/i] [b]Edit:[/b] [i]Passivity x Infinity & Beyond![/i] [/quote] Also, crikey, Briza! That was fast! I like it, though. Short and ever-so-sweet, and sprinkled with the main character's pomp for a bit of depth.