[@TheForgottenArc]

First of all, I'm enjoying this visit to Cerulean City. 
Second, I have two few notes on your last post. 

One, Dan's sister Celia's words are in a dark purple, and that makes them very hard to read against the dark background. Could you edit this and choose a lighter color? Or at least do so going forward. 

Two, this is more up to you, but the game time (by my best judgement) has been pushed to 7:30PM. I find it strange that Dan's Mom is waking from a nap at this time. She must be REALLY sick, when she would presumably be going bed for a night's sleep in a few more hours. You don't have to change anything; I'm just commenting. 

Thank you Everyone!
[@prettydrops][@iKatamalicious][@TheForgottenArc]