[@Hero] I know you spoke with me about the Kirlia issue, but I think Dahlia has a bit too many Pokemon at this moment. Other than that, I did notice some stuff in your backstory, mainly Ralts being "Raltz" and this segment:

[quote]When Dahlia went to visit Elena as a surprise, she found out that her friend had joined a group called Team Snagem. Despite immediately wanting to decline, Dahlia wondered why her supposed friend would want to join Snagem.[/quote]
Bit confused here, but if I'm reading this right, Elena asked Dahlia to join Snagem?