[@Eviledd1984] Okay, few things.... 
1) You need to stick with the CS form layout. The linebreaks need to go back in, as do the bolding in the code. Take a look at completed CS's in the CS tab for an example if you are lost.
2) BlueSky44 is trying to phase out Brotherhood members, so putting no affiliation would be better. They're not going to be an option anymore coming up as the story focuses on the X-Men primarily. 
3) (I have to ask this, and I really hate that I have to...) But can you write a neo-Nazi properly? There's a thin line between writing a racist character and writing racist-ly that a lot of people have trouble with. 
4) In terms of backstory, a Nazi joining the Brotherhood doesn't make sense. Magneto is jewish - he was sent to concentration camps and founded the Brotherhood essentially to prevent a second Holocaust. Magneto never would have accepted a character like him into the ranks. 
5) Additionally, just as an FYI to you, the Hellfire Club is not slated to appear in this RP.
6) Look again in the rules, you are missing things 
7) Personal opinion here, but I don't think this type of character matches the vibe of this RP at all. I think it'll be painful for you to write this individual and not conducive to a good RP experience...And the GM and I want everyone here to have the best experience possible. 

Given this and everything above...The GM and I do not feel that you would be a good fit for this RP.