[quote=@Athol] [@Sep] Should I post my sheet in the Characters page, or wait for you and [@Zarkun] to get yours in there first? [/quote] That's Sep's call. [quote=@Lotrix Molick] [hider=Nomi Laatl] [b]Name:[/b] Nomi Laatl [b]Species:[/b] [url=http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Yapi]Yapi[/url] [b]Age:[/b] 26 [b]Height:[/b] 2.45 m/8 feet [hider=Appearance] [img]https://orig00.deviantart.net/ae0d/f/2014/064/2/6/worgen_female_by_solpadein-d78zr3o.jpg[/img] [/hider] [b]Force Sensitive:[/b] Y, Fallanassi Force Adept [b]Skills:[/b] Knows Basic, High Galactic, Mando'a, Shyriiwook, and Thykarann. Can speak Shyriiwook and Thykarann clearly but with a bit of an accent. Extremely good cook. Martial training from a Mandalorian warrior. [b]Abilities:[/b] Yapi abilities: Keen sense of smell and hearing as well as sight, Natural weapons of bite and claws (can be imbued with Force), can eat just about anything that could feasibly provide sustenance, increased water retention ability Force Abilities: Force Weapon, Force immersion (Fallanassi Force Invisibility), Doppelganger (Fallanassi variant), Force Jump, Force Dash, Mirror Illusion (Fallanassi specific), Sound Mimicry, Force Sight, Mind Trick Other Abilities: Thought Shield [b]Weaknesses:[/b] DNA Damage: Induced by a designer virus called CDV-312, she is now infertile, has episodes of sleep paralysis, and altered, giant body structure that causes persistent minor pain. [b]Motivation:[/b] She is motivated to create a haven for anyone who wishes to oppose the Empire. She wants to see the Empire suffer for their actions against her friends and family. Nomi also teaches anyone about the White Current if they are interested, focusing heavily upon its teachings about authority being an illusion and all needing to follow their desires. [b]History:[/b] Nomi's particular subspecies of Yapi came from extended generations on a desert planet in a neighboring sector to Maldra. Her kind were long before exiled from their home due to tribal conflict, leading to adaptations to be more efficient in the desert. This caused a more bronze fur color and better water retention ability. In addition, their stomachs developed to be able to eat just about anything with nutritional value, whether plant or animal, decaying or fresh. With these adaptations over time, the culture developed and thrived to be focused upon independent individuals helping one another rather than a tribal structure. This came about mostly due to each adult finding and overseeing their own area to hunt and forage as a means to reduce resource strain. The Empire eventually found the planet's inhabitants, seeing them as subhuman primitives. As such, they made a designer virus, named CDV-312, to try and eradicate the population. The virus, rushed by higher ups, went into use too early and did not kill everyone. The fatality rate stayed at around 60%, thus leaving 30% of the population infertile, with all having damaged DNA, and often physically altered. Of that 40% remaining, nearly a quarter suffered a form of atavism, causing them to become nonsentient and aggressive. Nomi, 10 at the time, was part of the lucky few that kept sapient and alive. She suffered the infertility and DNA damage, causing her to suffer a form of gigantism and sleep paralysis. Her body was always in some minor pain. A passing ship stopped at their city for supplies, seeing the horrors of what had happened. Nomi lost her parents, so a couple adopted her and cared for her. This couple knew she had Force Sensitivity and let the newcomers know. A Fallanassi on the ship decided to take Nomi with her to teach their ways. Thus, Nomi spent the next 14 years off her homeworld, learning about the Fallanassi way of life. She thrived in the group, their independent streak working very well with her natural inclinations for independent yet social action. However, by the age of 24, she could not keep a pacifist. Her distaste of the Imperials led her to leave her Fallanassi allies and seek out a planet suitable to find allies. Maldra was close enough and fit the bill. For the past two years, she has spent her time learning languages to help her find others that might hate the Imperials. She currently lives alone in a desert cave protected by permanent illusions meant to emulate the Sijin legends, causing most to not bother her. In this two year span, she has saved the life of a Mandalorian woman, earning her hefty martial training and a contact within the Mandalorian Enclave. [/hider] [/quote] So we have what Sep gave you. Then there's also the Mandalorian things. First and foremost, unless your character is willing to embrace Mandalorian culture wholly, she wouldn't be trained, as the Mandalorians like their way of life to be [i]the[/i] way of life. Secondly, that's an awful lot of known languages for such a short span of time to learn. I also don't know that I can be OK with fluent Shyriiwook. For example, Elias has known how to understand it for years, but he's never attempted speaking it because outsiders/non-Wookies tend to butcher the language. I'm also not sure there will be two dialects of the Wookie language, but I won't make you remove it. Also, I can't say I'm OK with the Mando'a either.