Well it's out there now.

I tried taking a couple days to ponder if there was anything I could do to improve upon it, and didn't really come up with anything concrete. But I'm sure a comma is there that shouldn't be. Sometimes its fun just to see how twisted you can see "hey, you actually took time to craft and write these sentences and structure" as a negative thing.

Because keeping it subtle seems difficult. I wonder how obvious the styling of one of those moral stories in Christmas Tale/Narrator Bits will be. Time will tell.