[@alexfangtalon] Shy and I have gone over your sheets and there's just a few things we were wondering if you would be able to clarify :) we're super happy to have you back!!! [hider=notes] 1. For the Krieg-Königreich kingdom sheet, Shy and I were wondering how "war-like" the kingdom portrays itself to the rest of the world...and as a sidenote, a country so focused on war seems a bit reminiscent of present-day Middle Eastern countries, and that's not a [i]huge[/i] problem but we will definitely have to consider how that affects Lea/Aciran royal family's willingness to invite a prince from such a kingdom. 2. In Leon's CS, you say his sexuality is "female" :D. Typo? [/hider] [@Eric Horst] Elijah seems really interesting! [@shylarah] and I caught a few things we have questions about, but otherwise it should be good <3 [hider=a few things] 1. In the appearance, you mention "pale due to exposure to the sun"...Shy and I are assuming that's a typo? :D 2. When you mention "blowing things up" in Elijah's CS, are you talking about in a literal sense? If so, Shy and I aren't sure that he would be invited at all to Aciras, given the security threat that the Aciran royalty would think he poses 3. Also, this definitely not as important, but they're not a young-ish kingdom if it's several hundred years old. That's a pretty respectable amount of time for a kingdom to be in existence! :D[/hider]