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[@Balthazar007] I'm going to wait to make envy without more info on race choices and the world. 

Please give character a look over before I post. 
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I have a few minor comments that I'd like you to reexamine, the main one is the assertation that the entire city's missings person list are people that confronted her. That's a little overboard considering all the other bad things that happen in a city that could land someone on a missings person list. Perhaps change that to MANY of the names on the list are people who faced her. 

I'm walking into work now, so I can't go into further detail till tomorrow morning. If you change that one thing first, you can go ahead and post. I think she would fit perfectly in the Governing District that I've described in the 1st IC post. 

See everyone tomorrow morning.