[@Noodles] Great concept. But the information is feeling pretty bare bones. I'll make a list. 1. Physique needs a bit more specific details. Like her height can be more than just "She's tall", how tall is she really? Everyone else's CS tells their height and or weight. Along with any more specific details would be appreciated. 2. For abilities please list them off with a name for the ability. Such as "Paperworker: Ast is good at doing paperwork. Her reports are often clear and concise. She has a good listening ear to current affairs." 3. "Illusions" Needs more detail. What kind of beasts can they summon illusions of? Why or how does it work on the undead? Same with "Flaming Rods" What is the distance it can be cost, how hot does it get, what does it do exactly? 4. [b]Experience[/b] Is more than a brief detail of what your character did to begin their journey to learning what they know. I need to know what they did to learn such spells, and or abilities. So what kind of training did she undergo to learn her spells? What did she do to learn her abilities? 5. Motivation, why does she want to learn about ancient magic? Why does she have her motivation? 6. Birthplace is Vrondi. You got a typo. 7. For extra info you might want to add "History" to it and fill it out with your characters past story. Thanks you're almost there! ^-^