Working on my post now X3 I don't think I'll be borrowing anything else for it, as these interactions are taking a completely new path of how they interact haha.

Oh also, should the Lunairans have their own language? Like, with him speaking and it being Lunairan, she would be able to understand him because it was her mother's native language and she would have been taught it and be fluent in it just as well as she is in English. I was thinking it would be interesting for him to think that perhaps the Lunairan and human language is the same, only to be totally confused when they meet the halfbloods who all speak the human language that he can't understand XD

So, idea. As I was reading your post, I got to thinking about Evelyn and Cae's abilities. What if, in the future while she still pretty much hates him and him the same, she's able to find a way around his ability? Like, at first she has no idea how he suddenly keeps disappearing like that, but when she finally figures it out in the middle of one of the visions, she manages to 'crack through' the vision to see him and the world around them. Kind of like her own mental abilities sense the danger and break through it for her? It woudl kind of be another 'what the hell?' moment for him before actually finding out what she is, wondering how what he thought is a weak and defenseless human was able to break through the very ability he defeated many of the much superior Lunairans with. Of course, this wouldn't happen until a little bit later, but I thought it would be an interesting first view of just how powerful she is compared to even Lunairans with above average abilities.

Another idea: This is something I was thinking about as I went to sleep last night, and that's the process of announcing future mates before the Lunairan community. I just don't see them going up to a person and saying 'so and so is going to be your mate' and not announcing it to the others in the community. And a weird sort of set up came to mind. It's almost visually similar to the Hunger Games reaping. With the males on one side and females on the other. Rather than the bowl with names of course though, its a list with the predetermined mates for that 'season'. Keeping in mind that while all the unmated males and females are out there in those two groups, not all of them will be mated depending on their compatibility. I can picture it being nerve wracking for some, wondering if this season will finally be the season they get a mate. And for others, the barren males or females unable to repopulate, it being a torturous event, knowing they will NEVER have their names called. 

What do you think of these two?