[@Altered Tundra] My first complaint is with all the headers/pictures/whatever at the top of the sheet are entirely unnecessary. I know you're trying to sell the character but in all honesty, it's redundant and you should do that through writing. But that's just me.

Other than that, I can't really bring up any major complaints with the character itself (other than the quotes you used Jesus Christ why). The power, on the other hand, I have a few problems. Putting a dent in metal (or fracturing bones) with air is very, very, nonsensical in concept even for this RP's standards. Because, as it's not a solid object because of how air works; it literally can't be focused that way at all. I'm going to overlook the obvious problem with air manipulation (and that is it requires an [i]assload[/i] of force to do most of the stuff). I'm wondering how he's especially weak to electricity though? That section was a little vague to me and requires expansion.