[quote=@Lmpkio]
Whew! That was a long post - but unbelievably fun to write! Did a little battle scenario just as an intro sequence.

Also, I leveled up to Level 2! What should I do with it? I'm guessing add a new power right? (Ik it says so in the OCC - amongst two other possibilities - but I just want approval first before doing so)
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Yes, you get a level point that you can use for a strength or new power. Right now the power has to be one that Geno can attain or originally had before coming here. I'd like you to check the new power in with me for approval, just to make sure all's well. You don't need to spend it at the moment if you don't want, though.

Also, kudos to you for having such a thorough knowledge of Mario & Rabbids, either by playing it yourself or for going out of the way to research it. It's not exactly a well-known title.

That said, reiterating my descriptions (specifically that of the land, and its inhabitants to a lesser degree) in such detail might not be necessary in the future. Plus, while I did give you free reign, you should probably tone down a few factors in the future. A giant robo-heavy is no easy feat to take down, and finding a very strong sniper in the possession of an early-game Rabbid right next to his hiding spot and having Geno hit his first ever shot with it despite not being proficient with firearms, is rather convenient. I wouldn't say I'm too knowledgeable about writing, but a prominent author once said that conveniences to get into trouble are fine, while conveniences to get out of trouble are cheating.

Don't worry about editing, since everyone gets lucky now and then, but bear it in mind going forward. If you have any questions about what's good or not, or want me to chime in with something that might happen in certain situation, I'm happy to help! Either way, the post was highly entertaining.