[@Lemons] Everything looks dandy outside one issue that is technically my fault. I had forgotten to mention this in the OOC since in the previous rendition I hadn't really had a need to, but names in Kyrielight are somewhat "Sci-Fi." What I mean is that Amber might be spelled Amburr, or something along those lines.

However, I suppose I could just write it off as the further one gets from Earth, the more "Sci-Fi" their name can get, as spelling tends to change as names extend their reach. So, if you want to change it, feel free to, otherwise everything is looks fine and approved.