Understood, I can make those edits. And what sort of formatting errors?

I could just rewrite the end bit, so instead of telling her she's created like that, just say nothing, and instead take time to process stuff? I don't mind any form of needling or whatever, I asked for feedback, so anything is always good. So uh yeah, I can make whatever edits are needed, though Chris would want to tell Meg the full situation, but it's also likely he'd wait, until he was positive that it wasn't some elaborate lucid dream brought on by stress.

Edit 1: To add onto what was said previously, I wasn't overly sure how to frame the first interaction between NPC and player, so this helps me to know how to better frame it, potentially. With the whole real history thing.