[@BrokenPromise] The Free section is far from the quality I produce, and expect; reason why I didn't post there. The IT was just a genre interest check, and I didn't think there would need to be that much detail (to my surprise, I was wrong). Thank you for the example IT, I am aware of how one should look; I use to RP here very frequently quite a few years back. I'll reform my IT, I guess! [@The Harbinger of Ferocity] Thank you for the wise words. I didn't realize Advanced would be so "proper", so to speak ha ha. Although I should have! Again, thanks for the wise words. I guess I'll be revising my IT! Just for anyone else who reads this, I'm not a rook to the RP world, or writing. I just didn't realize people would need so much detail for such a simple question. Thanks to all the response in this thread, though!